Fic: I'm Not Through With You Yet (One Cotton-Pickin' Moment)

[so_egregious]

Title: I'm Not Through With You Yet (One Cotton-Pickin' Moment)
Author: C, aka so_egregious
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,056.
Pairing: John/Paul
Warnings: Language.
Disclaimer: This is a true definition of fan fiction: a work of fiction, created by a fan.
Author's Notes/Summary: Hi there! Long time, no see! :) This was written for jhp_projects' anniversary shindig.

Comments

[quazonic]

Aww, I love how you've made one TINY moment have so many layers to it! REALLY well done! :) Though I find it kind of scary that John may have possibly contemplated letting go of Paul. D: Stupid boy - what the hell was he thinking. >:(

[beatmy_heartout]

OH my god your avatar is ADORABLE and I wish I knew what photo that came from haha :(

[quazonic]

Thanks! And lol, I think I can find it for you!

*drumroll*

Oh wow, it turns out I already uploaded it to Photobucket!

[beatmy_heartout]

Ahh! Omg yes thank you! Hahahaha :D

[beatmy_heartout]

OHHH I was so beyond thrilled to see you had written! And this was SO intense and wonderful! You NEVER disappoint.

[so_egregious]

Oh, thanks so much! That's really kind of you to say and I'm so happy you liked it! :D

[beagle_agent]

If he doesn’t die, Paul vows as he hangs in the balance, he will kill Francie making him wear this fucking thing.
ROFL...I am sure he will!

And his thoughts about WHY John wears black.....fantastic.

This was brilliant, thoughts that shot through Paul's mind in a flash only, but so much might go on in his head there.

Thanks for your wonderful stories, I always love how you make such great things out of small pieces/moments/pics etc.

Astrid

[so_egregious]

Thank you so much! I love to DO just that - pick things apart for the who/what/when/where/why/how, so I'm really happy it works for you. ;)

That suit has got to be the biggest sign of all that Francie was just Bad. Bad. News. ;)

[quazonic]

Hey, I LIKE the suit! xD

[so_egregious]

We will have to agree to disagree on this one. Still friends? ;)

[macca44552]

AH, there you are! I was wondering where you went, and if you were still going to write John/Paul, because you're one of my favorite writers! :D

Like others have said, I really liked how you took this one moment and made such a great story about it. I FELT Paul's fear when his foot slipped, his relief when John caught him, his fear and (nearly) acceptance of death, and his overwhelming relief when John didn't just let him go. I also loved how all of Paul's flashbacks included John. It was very surreal: his life started with him, and now it was ending with him.

Most of all, I really liked how this was supposed to be a metaphor about John. Despite the fact that he tries to let Paul go--that he wants to let Paul go--he can't. That was very touching.

I hope that you continue to write if you're not too busy. This was amazing. :)

<333

[so_egregious]

Oh you always say the NICEST things! I'm absolutely flattered, not to mention so happy that you enjoyed this little bit of nonsense! Thanks a lot! :)

My absence had little to do with not wanting to write, I promise you - my husband and I were on vacation for two weeks, then were computerless for three while it went in for repairs. I actually started this months ago, and only NOW got around to finishing it. :P

Thank you again, my friend!

[semolina_p79]

Wow, you really stretched that moment out, there!

You do well with conveying different feelings.

This was a unique, interesting read.

[so_egregious]

Thanks so much! Yeah, I get a little obsessive over little things, but I'm glad you liked this. :)