Comments | so_say_we_all: Fic: "Past The Red Line" Part 4

millari in so_say_we_all

Fic: "Past The Red Line" Part 4

Apr 09, 2007 13:22

“I hate this part,” Anders grumbled, as he looked through the high-powered binoculars around his neck yet another time.

“What, the waiting?” Tyrol, bored, had been lying in the dirt and brush. He felt incredibly tired, yet he was far too wired and restless to actually fall asleep, so he was lying there, settling for resting his eyes. But Anders’ ( Read more... )

helena cain, resistance, galen tyrol, rated:pg-13, jammer, past the red line, sam anders, author:millari, new caprica, author:_usakeh_

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rap541 April 9 2007, 19:43:57 UTC

Nicely done. Cain is simply monstrous and yet you sorta see her side of things. Jammer's concern - and I can see where his NCP decision is going to come into play - is also great. Good job.

millari April 10 2007, 00:27:07 UTC

Thanks very much. When we first started SSWA, I remember thinking that I would never try writing Cain. Then it turned out that I needed to, and so I had to think very hard about her point of view. I thought I would never sympathize with her, and yet when I went to write her, I realized that I wanted to make sure that her side of things was at least practical and on some level understandable, if not something that most people could get behind. So thanks. That's exactly the reaction I was hoping for.