Phew. Done. This final chapter is almost certainly full of mistakes, absolutely definitely full of angst and may not make sense, but, you know, DONE. YAY.
I think the whole fic clocks in at around 80,000 words all told. Never again. Seriously. Not ever doing this again.
Chapters 1-28:
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This was an amazing, beautiful, delicate and humane look at Erik and Charles and all the other characters. You have really written wonderfully from Erik's POV--one of the best I've read so far! Seriously, so amazing. Very believable and sympathetic, capturing his anger, rigidity yet uncertainty, his confusion, his sadness and hurt, his passion, his love. It's so powerful and it was believable every step of the way. All of them are so adult in certain ways yet so young, so innocent, and aughhh I just blubbered all the way through the end, especially since I read the Wikipedia page BEFORE I actually the fic (stupid me ( ... )
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The Wikipedia page is agonising, isn't it? Tawabids wrote it for me before the fic was even finished, and it was amazing how much of the future she imagined matched up to what I was writing. I really wish they could have got their happily ever after ending, the one I intended to give them when I started, but by about half way in I guess I knew it wasn't going to happen. Still, seeing all their tragedies written down in black and white was sooo sad! (I got surprisingly emotionally invested in this version of Erik ( ... )
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Thank you for writing one of the best, if not the best, high school!AU in this fandom! You rock!
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You should play with these (young and old!) gentlemen more often! You write them beautifully!
Your fic is always on my mind! It's on my recs list and everything! It has the perfect blend of romance, drama, comedy, and angst, so, many kudos to you for really blending all of these seamlessly. :D
By the way! In reply to something you said on tumblr: I personally think the second half of the story (if you meant the whole Human/Mutant "quiet battle" going on) was actually very well handled. It wasn't overbearing to the overall arc of the story and you handled it delicately.
So yeah, just my two cents! <333
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Thanks for the reassurance about the second half of Late Bloomer! Yes, that's the part I meant - all Erik and Charles's many ideological arguments and the ending in general. I had the most horrendous time writing it, and I reread it maybe a year later and winced SO MUCH, but I guess it's different seen from the outside. It's really nice to know that it worked for you!
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