brigit's flame - june: week 2, "nominal nomad"

Jun 12, 2011 02:13


Written for "nominal nomad" over at BF. I don't even know, guys. This starts out very Hemingway-ish. Don't forget to breathe between sentences!

A Letter: The Shaman of Huang He )

writing, fiction, june, brigits_flame, week 2

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eiremauve June 19 2011, 02:42:05 UTC
This is a cool letter! It's mildiy creepy but fun at the same time. My favourite line was: "Like licorice, with a deep undercurrent of wood." It's a very vivd simile.

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so_wordy July 1 2011, 11:04:30 UTC
Of course! Go on and give it a shot. I can't wait to see what you do with it. :)

I only wish I had time to participate. THORA, run another event like this SOON..

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