Debris

Mar 30, 2005 22:06

She looked down at her arms, riddled like the truth with collapsed veins. "Hey! Are you going to help me clean up or are you going to give me the cash--- cause either way I need a fix from this situation", she paused, then sighed heavily, absentmindedly scratching her collarbone. "Look, I'm... I'm sorry, ok? But I just can't do this alone and I' ( Read more... )

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tabetha53085 March 30 2005, 20:54:08 UTC
I think it's awesome!! Very descriptive, i want to know what's going to happen write a book already dang it woman! I wish i had half the talent you have. Great job!!!

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soakednsinamyn March 30 2005, 21:01:19 UTC
Tabi mah-love that's it. It's a short story. I guess there's not really an end (or a beginning). But I'm glad you like it! I'm taking a creative writing course next semester.

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tabetha53085 March 30 2005, 21:52:51 UTC
you should write me a story for my b-day, that would be awesome!!! nothing too long. or just give me a lovely tap on the boobies like always lol!

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amour___propre July 24 2006, 20:25:18 UTC
And I think you'll win. :)

I came across your journal as I surfed LJ and this story sucked me in! You are definitely a talented writer... best of luck with your scho-

I typed this before getting distracted by work and now I realize that this entry is super-old. Well anyhow, you've got a talent and I just wanted to compliment you on it.

Have a great day!

♥Portia

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amour___propre July 29 2006, 23:04:19 UTC
I still appreciate your compliments!

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