lost fic: your shadows tell a story (multiple pairings)

[angeldylan628]

Title: your shadows tell a story
Character(s)/Pairing(s): charlie/claire, jack/juliet, jack/sawyer, sawyer/kate, sayid/kate
Rating/Word Count: pg-13, 1,651 words
Summary five snippets, five different lives, five conversations they never got to have
A/N: Written for lostfichallenge, challenge 104 free-for-all. I decided to write all the ships I didn't write enough

Comments

[squeakyboots]

I loved the first two so much. The second, because you totally sold me on the Jack you created even though he's different from the character we know. The first, for this:

They are her father’s words - unwanted advice, life lessons. Where Jack withstood to pressure, Claire crumbled, always the weaker sibling.

This is so excellent and tantalizing -- it makes me want to know more about the universe in which they grew up together.

[angeldylan628]

Jack always has come across to me as someone who has the potential to be arrogant. It's just his father's less than stellar opinion of him keeps his ego in check.

I wish more people would write them growing up together. I can only imagine how things would have changed for them.

Thanks for the feedback! I'm really glad you liked this! :)

[morbidmuse]

These are amazing. Although the Jack/Juliet and Kate/Sayid ones may be my favorite, I really love all of them. Excellent job.

[angeldylan628]

Thank you sweetie! I'm glad you liked them :)

[zelda_zee]

What a great fic! I enjoyed the whole of it, each section was so interesting. Lovely work!

[angeldylan628]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[valhalla37]

These are so, so, so awesome -- I love the concept in itself and what you did with it even more. I think I love the Jack/Juliet one most, because it draws such an awesome, interesting portrait of them -- plus I'm kind of in love with the idea of them as college students. Also, true fact: you made me care about Claire/Charlie when I don't really, especially with how heartbreaking and vivid it all is.

[angeldylan628]

Thanks! I love the idea of Jack and Juliet in medical school together & as college sweethearts.

[smirk_dog]

This is so, so lovely and well thought out. Jack/Sawyer? On point? I think I could kiss you.

[angeldylan628]

*blushes* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!