Comments | soapboxblues: lost drabble: your fathers all died in the war (jack, clementine)

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lost drabble: your fathers all died in the war (jack, clementine)

Mar 28, 2010 00:34

Title: your fathers all died in the war
Character(s)/Pairing(s): jack, clementine (jack/sawyer)
Word Count/Rating: 108, PG
Summary: his dad used to say that an ugly past is something you can't make better set in the alternate universe. spoilers for 6x05.
A/N: For lost_in_108 prompt history

( Her hands are heavy in his )

pairing: jack/sawyer, character: jack shepherd, character: clementine ford

Comments 11

crickets March 28 2010, 17:20:24 UTC

Aw, that's sad. Well done!

angeldylan628 March 30 2010, 04:38:08 UTC

Thanks!

ozmissage March 30 2010, 01:32:18 UTC

This is so achy and such a poignant look at Jack, Sawyer, and Clementine. Wonderful job.

angeldylan628 March 30 2010, 04:39:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

hopelessfangirl March 30 2010, 03:26:56 UTC

I love this a LOT.

angeldylan628 March 30 2010, 04:39:44 UTC

Thanks, sweetie :)

invisiblelove March 30 2010, 03:41:52 UTC

Beautiful job. You write Jack's melancholy very well, especially in so few words.

angeldylan628 March 30 2010, 04:40:11 UTC

Thank you :)

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angeldylan628 March 30 2010, 19:05:56 UTC

Thank you! I have an odd fascination with Clementine and Jack interacting. I think it stems back to a Cassidy/Jack fic that I never finished.