I echo the above sentiment. These are short snippets which lack an overarching plot to hold everything together. With the absence of a such a thematic device, it may be advisable to consider alternative literary forms.
Collection of short stories and online blog actually. It might be a more solvent option to have passive web advertising than to sink in a large chunk of money on publishing. Maybe you can even explore mobinovels, potentially as a tie up with a certain local pink site. Just some ideas :)
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