Whew! At least he didn't set the thing to kill. That would have spoiled all his fun. ^$#&*%@#( him!
Very nice description of the aftermath on the various characters. And they're now going to be more focused on doing what they do best. :D I like that. :)
I can't even be eloquent in my praise and love for this story, so I hope I'm not boring you with repeating myself.
Love the opening phrases of Gideon's letter being used as a refrain - and then bringing us to this:
Reid looks away, rolling his fingers into fists to control the trembling. Gideon had known, he thinks. Somehow he’d known. Scared is what Reid is of the dark. Frightened is what he is of losing people.
I just... really, this gets better and better with every new part.
Thank you so much. I secretly think you're too nice to me. But I also secretly like that you liked the part you pointed out. :) It was my favorite section to write, but there's always that question... is the tone of this going to work the way I want it to?
So, with my secret thinking not so secret anymore... thanks again. As always, glad to have you reading.
This is brilliant and amazing and everything else inbetween. My heart goes out for the entire team (mostly Reid though ^^) and I can't wait for the next update.
My mom has never watched Criminal Minds - but she was asking me why I had squealed in excitement after I checked my mail... *cough* I have no life *cough*
And so I started telling her about your fic and she kind of just rolled her eyes and told me that in all likelyhood, Gideon was the unsub. I kind of had an 'O.o' moment. I mean... it CAN'T be Gideon... but at the same time that would be a really interesting twist...
But I have now decided that there is nothing more frightening than my mother talking about possible unsubs. It is even more frightening than the time she mimicked Gollum.
... I'm rambling...
Whatever. Awesome story. Please update soon. It makes me happy. Batta bing batta boom.
Thank you. May the muses make all your kind words about my writing actually true. ;)
So, your mom's weighing in on whether or not Gideon is the unsub? All I'll say is I was surprised that even after just the first chapter, readers were suspecting him. And, within the next two chapters you will likely know for certain whether he is or isn't. :) Or is... or not. ;)
for some reason, i had missed seeing this story around. i read the first part today just to check it out and was so hooked, i just gobbled up the next 11 in one sitting. Great job with the suspense and the cliffhangers and the characterizations. I am really enjoying it! I look forward to the next part.:D
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Very nice description of the aftermath on the various characters. And they're now going to be more focused on doing what they do best. :D I like that. :)
Nicely done. :)
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Love the opening phrases of Gideon's letter being used as a refrain - and then bringing us to this:
Reid looks away, rolling his fingers into fists to control the trembling. Gideon had known, he thinks. Somehow he’d known. Scared is what Reid is of the dark. Frightened is what he is of losing people.
I just... really, this gets better and better with every new part.
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So, with my secret thinking not so secret anymore... thanks again. As always, glad to have you reading.
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This is brilliant and amazing and everything else inbetween. My heart goes out for the entire team (mostly Reid though ^^) and I can't wait for the next update.
My mom has never watched Criminal Minds - but she was asking me why I had squealed in excitement after I checked my mail... *cough* I have no life *cough*
And so I started telling her about your fic and she kind of just rolled her eyes and told me that in all likelyhood, Gideon was the unsub. I kind of had an 'O.o' moment. I mean... it CAN'T be Gideon... but at the same time that would be a really interesting twist...
But I have now decided that there is nothing more frightening than my mother talking about possible unsubs. It is even more frightening than the time she mimicked Gollum.
... I'm rambling...
Whatever. Awesome story. Please update soon. It makes me happy. Batta bing batta boom.
I'm outta' here. ^^
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So, your mom's weighing in on whether or not Gideon is the unsub? All I'll say is I was surprised that even after just the first chapter, readers were suspecting him. And, within the next two chapters you will likely know for certain whether he is or isn't. :) Or is... or not. ;)
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So glad.
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