Criminal Minds: Trompe L'oeil (part 15)

[sodakey]

~ (part fifteen) ~

When he arrives at the police station, Delia Poe's husband looks relieved to see his wife, but confused at the setting, like he's unsure what he's just been brought into. Despite the increasingly violent movement in the air outside, the atmosphere inside the station is static. Motionless. Too much like inaction. Too much like

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[xeverywherex]

I've just started reading this, and I think it's absolutely fantastic. I love your writing style, and the way you've managed to capture the team's voices perfectly. Can't wait for the next chapter. Not knowing what's going on with Gideon is so frustrating!

[sodakey]

Welcome. So glad you're enjoying the tale.

Pleased the Gideon mystery is pulling at you. :)

[qultng1]

Oh boy! Things are suddenly moving sort of fast! Cool. :D

I'm over here 'cause the ff link didn't work for me today. Glad you're in both places. :D

Love the tension and suspense and Morgan's "Don't get dead." Awesome.

Nicely done. :)

[sodakey]

Yeah, I took the pacing and pov's and staggered it a bit for this chapter. Sometimes, some of this stuff works better in my head.

I'm in a hate phase with my sort-of-like/hate relationship with fanfiction.net. It lulled me into complacency in my posting of the last few chapters and then... Chapter 15 was there, last night, for at least few minutes. And then just gone. Gone from my account, gone from the list. As though it never was. What's that about?

Maybe I hallucinated the whole thing...

Probably means I'll start just posting over here again. ;p

Glad you found the alternate. :)

[princesslacus]

OH WOW INTENSE! I am very very intrigued by what Garcia found out! I loved that subtle gesture of worry Hotch displayed and Morgan caught earlier. I wonder where Hotch had to go that was so important, I have a hopeful guess. OMG SO EPIC. I miss hearing about my Reid though. I can't wait for more. This is pure creative genius! Thank you for sharing!

[sodakey]

lol. Silly me. I just figured out you are the kind reviewer over at the pit as well. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. :)

[lilmoonbunny16]

OMG! So many updates!!! *does a happy dance* I am so in love with this whole story! I think you did a great job shifting perspectives between the different characters.

More Please!!!

[sodakey]

I am trying. :) I'm hoping to get one more up before I leave again. (hoping)

I'm glad the shifting between povs worked, and that you are still following along.

[daylyn]

Whoa! Exciting and dramatic and thrilling and OMG I need MOAR RIGHT NOW PLZ!!!!! *cough* Or... you know... whenever you get to it.

I'm on the edge of my seat here.

[sodakey]

Thanks, Daylyn! I will try to... get more up as soon as I can. :)