trompe l'oeil: short commentary and a few questions

[sodakey]

I utilize a lot of allusions when I write.  Even in my so-called real life writing I do this, and Trompe L’oeil is no exception.  Allusions are a quick, often effective way to invoke an image or emotion in a reader’s mind without losing the tone or having to spread explanations over several paragraphs.  But, it’s a risk...

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[rabirhek]

Hello sodakey

[sodakey]

Thank you for the feedback. It made sense to me, and I'm grateful you took a minute to share your thoughts. In all the feedback I got, there were somethings I needed to legitimately clarify, and did go back and clarify. There are others I should probably clarify but am not planning to do so at the moment. And of course, there are some few out there that I think might be confused no matter what I did.

We are all ever learning.

Thanks again, and I hope you enjoy the conclusion of the story. :)