Watch it Fall

[soddingmad]

The cold air closed around
The crowds walked by without a sound
Your eyes were fixed upon a girl
I wanted you to show
Just any sign to let me know
Where I stand in your world

But all of my emotions
Were nothing in the end
I can't make you feel the same way
I can't make your will bend
And I tried so hard to tell you
I tried to tell you all along
That you made

Comments

[foxfiresgirl]

*smoooootch*

[soddingmad]

*giggles* I think there's only one other poem I've written that's better and more dramatic than that one..
And I'm not gonna show ya! MWA HA HA HA!