Comments | sodoesrachael: fic: Younger Now Than We Were Before

sodoesrachael

fic: Younger Now Than We Were Before

Jul 19, 2009 12:29

Title: Younger Now Than We Were Before
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Rating: Um, maybe T/PG-13 just for a few naughty words. :P
Warnings: spoilers for Amplification and for Revelations and the ensuing Reid story line.
Notes: This is a follow up to my story Hangman, which I would like if you read first, but it's not exactly required. ;)

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Comments 31

bookgodess15 July 20 2009, 03:36:32 UTC

SOMEONE HAS ANSWERED MY CRY FOR GOOD M/R FANFICTION. THANK YOU.

Really, honey, the only think wrong with this fic was that you need to cut the pre out and just start slashing them. Rabidly. Because you are a good writer and M/R needs good writers like whoa.

(Also, um, I know this goes with your introspective, passive tone here, but you, um, switch subjects without starting a new paragraph. Like, this:

“You know,” Reid said quietly, “this feels a lot like... before, you know?” Nodding again, Morgan cleared his throat. “Yeah, I know.” They sat in silence again, both lost in their thoughts, until Reid finally spoke. “I- uh- I had a nightmare. Again. Just now. And- uh- when I woke up, I forgot you were here.” He looked up at Morgan for a moment, before giving a half shrug and looking at the couch again. “But then I remembered, and- thank you. I- just... thanks." If the atmosphere hadn't been so somber, Morgan might have laughed at Reid's attempts to express himself, but as it was he simply nodded again.should be ( ... )

sodoesrachael July 20 2009, 03:55:52 UTC

OMG thanks for the awesome comment!! <3 <3 Glad you enjoyed it!! :D

And yeah... that's just me. I'm really not a fan of making/reading a new line for each sentence of dialog, so when I write I try to stay away from doing that. It's kind of a pet peeve of mine. Meep. Weird, yes, but it's a true story. Sorry that it bugs you! It's just my style. :P (Readers of my QaF fics are used to it by now. lolz.) Then again, I guess it all just hangs better together in my head since I wrote it, huh? I shall keep your advice in mind for next time, but for this one I just love how it came together. :P

Again: OMG THANKS FOR THE COMMENT!! <3 <3 <3 <3

momma_66 July 20 2009, 04:12:30 UTC

perfect, you had the whole team so well written. Stop being uncertain you do this fandom great justice!

sodoesrachael July 23 2009, 17:29:39 UTC

Aww, thanks!! <3 <3 I'm very glad that you liked it! :D

the_tim_world July 20 2009, 05:59:24 UTC

Awww. This was so cute. I kinda want to read a Reid and Henry fic. ;)

sodoesrachael July 23 2009, 17:30:28 UTC

:D :D :D Thanks for the comment!! <3

And me too! Hey, you should write it. ;)

the_tim_world July 26 2009, 03:54:39 UTC

Sorry, I just saw this.

You're very welcome!

I don't write fiction, I just give people ideas, ;)

sodoesrachael July 28 2009, 14:16:40 UTC

lolz. Also, meh. I'm not really comfortable enough writing in this fandom yet. Now, were you to give me QaF ideas, I might run with them. ;) I loves writing in that silly fandom. :P

marcellajoleen July 20 2009, 07:24:13 UTC

I really enjoyed this! I just posted a gen. fic about Reid in my personal journal, if you wanted to read it, I can add you =) I always love a new equally CM obsessed friend.

sodoesrachael July 23 2009, 17:31:23 UTC

:D Yay! Glad that you liked it! :D :D :D <3

And I shall add you as soon as I'm done replying to all these comments. :D

lagolindari July 20 2009, 08:27:48 UTC

♥!

I see it's still time for Amplification-follow ups for all of us ;)!

Loved it.

sodoesrachael July 23 2009, 17:33:03 UTC

Heh, well, I've been working on this one for a while, but I kept getting stuck at one part. So I nearly started over and then it was okay. :D But when I get stuck on something it takes me a while to go back to it. :P

Anywho, thanks so much for the comment!! ♥♥