Fanfic - The Great Puzzle 1/3 [Sherlock BBC: John/Sherlock]

[soera]

Comments

[steff3]

This is amazing! It is really obvious to us that John is living through events again or somehow has foreknowledge and is sorting things out to the best of his ability. It is fascinating how things change and how others stay the same. It is clear to me now that the one bit of info that could have came out of meeting the cabbie would have been Moriarty and now John is trying to do something to him without Sherlock being the wiser. Also, I love the fact that John is consciously helping Sherlock get to the answers in his own way and taking Sherlock's side instantly rather than taking a while as he does the first time. Intrigued by Sherlock's deductions that John is hanging out at a pub but not drinking and I assume it has something to do with Moriarty? Love Sherlock's perspective and his fascination and adoration for John. Love that everytime John helps him get to his deductions quicker than it was before, he is enraptured with John and the way he said to never leave him made me squee! Love and adore this fic and hope there will be an

[soera]

Thank you! You're absolutely right on all counts, and the next chapter will definitely be addressing some of what you've mentioned here. The fic's actually complete, and I'm just making a few minor edits now, so expect the next chapter in a day or two! =D

[samuraii]

Plz Mooooore~~~

I get the feeling that maybe John is Moriarty? Am i right?

[soera]

Nooot quite, but the next chapter will be up in a day or two so you'll get your answers then. =D Thank you for commenting!

[anonymous]

I'm curious where this is going. Your Sherlock PoV is interesting, especially as it's clear John is the thing that's changed. I assume that John somehow knows what's going to happen in this, thus all the small changes.

I hope you continue.

[soera]

Thank you! You're right about John - and really, that's why I wanted to write from Sherlock's POV... have him trying to figure out all these oddities about John. I'm glad the POV works for you!
The fic's complete, and I'm just making minor edits now. Expect the next chapter in a day or two. =D

[wind_hover]

This is terribly interesting - I like John's little actions that suggest he knows how Sherlock will act already. Looking forward to more!

[soera]

Thank you! The next chapter will be up in a day or two, once I've made a few minor edits. =D

[shezan]

ABSOLUTELY FASCINATING. I have several theories and I might be wrong in ALL OF THEM. MOAR please? MOAR with a hound puppy on top?

[soera]

PUPPY! You'll be glad to know the fic is complete, and I'll be posting the next part in a day or two, once I've made some minor edits. And then you can find out if any of your theories are right! =D