Beside you and the Sun (Kirk/Spock)

[sofia_rock]

Pairing: Spock/Kirk
Rating: none
Notes: This is the first Kirk/Spock fic I've ever written, and I wrote it after I had seen 'The Wrath of Khan', and that explains the ending...

Beside you and the Sun

It goes on and on and on. Spock can't stop looking at him. Looking at the way he moves, the way his lips move when he talks, they way he gives orders

Comments

[sofia_rock]

Thank you so much <3

[kradie]

No, not cheesy, beautiful! I find that writing about Spock's feelings can be hard, but you did it very, very well. I especially liked how you described how he made him feel: Jim makes him weak, he makes him pure Also, the end made my heart break a little. No, not a little, quite alot.

Am absolutely bookmarking this. Good job! :D

[sofia_rock]

Thank you so much! You made my day with this comment <3
The end is true, I think, and that's what makes it so heartbreaking :(

[kradie]

Yes, it is true. They dote that much on each other, both to and beyond death.
The fact that Kirk can't hold his hand in Wrath of Khan is so sad, along with his comments on that in Search for Spock.

[sofia_rock]

I agree :(

[julietbeyond]

Marry me? Tämä on siis niiiiiiin.... guhhh <333333333333333333333333

[sofia_rock]

Tää on tosi nolo :D En ees muistanu