I'm not that familiar with Voyager, but my brain is stuffed with all sorts of (movie) trivia. Every now and then my memory bank pops up a movie quote or sometimes an entire dialog. I just let it happen, 'cause we all know that "resistance is futile." ;) Thanks for reading my story.
Working on this surprise-story was so much fun as well as exciting; writing for a new pairing, finding a different beta-reader (and sharing this secret with her to surprise you was tremendous fun)and then the anticipation ....
Okay, I'm starting to ramble now. All I want to say is that I'm happy to have send you this present and I'm really glad you love it. *big hug*
Full of emotions and it was a wonderful idea to bring back 'Uncle Bob'. Cameron's struggle with emotions is excellent described and understandable. The happy ending was great.
But I have to say I don't understand Sarah's changed behaviour towards Cameron compared to their relationship I know from the show. I would have like a little more explanation how Sarah changed her mind about Cameron.
In my story Sarah is just as confused. She understands her inner turmoil when she's 'taken' to John Henry and because of what she sees there, she comes to terms with her feelings. You're right, there is no real setup for Sarah's change of heart. It's something she slowly comes aware of because of Cameron's change of attitude towards her. That was my idea, but after reading your comment, I think I was too vague or way too subtle on that matter. Anyways, thanks you for reading my story and for your feedback.
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“I understand the concept of humor. It may not be apparent, but I am often amused by human behavior.”
Isn't that something Seven of Nine said on Voyager? (think I spotted another Seven-ism later too)
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I just let it happen, 'cause we all know that "resistance is futile." ;)
Thanks for reading my story.
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Working on this surprise-story was so much fun as well as exciting; writing for a new pairing, finding a different beta-reader (and sharing this secret with her to surprise you was tremendous fun)and then the anticipation ....
Okay, I'm starting to ramble now. All I want to say is that I'm happy to have send you this present and I'm really glad you love it. *big hug*
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But I have to say I don't understand Sarah's changed behaviour towards Cameron compared to their relationship I know from the show. I would have like a little more explanation how Sarah changed her mind about Cameron.
hope you will keep writing.
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