at the top of my lungs

[softboys]

Title: at the top of my lungs.
Pairing: wonshik/hongbin, taekwoon/hakyeon.
Rating: NC-17.
Wordcount: 7,6k.
Warnings: pwp, wonshik being sappy, attempts at humor.
Summary: wonshik comes home to find a mountain of blankets on his sofa.
Notes: I DID IT HOMEQURL!!! IT IS FINALLY, FINALLY DONE. I started this fic about a year ago, and now it's done.

Comments

[hongbinbong]

YOU LITTLE SHIT, I DID NOT SEE THIS COMING (STILL LOVE YOU FOR THIS THOUGH. BLESS YOU)
i am in ruins. you're not going to believe me because you never do, even though i tell you that the things you write are good. bUT YOU BETTER, BECAUSE I AM A MESS. this is good, really good and i'm so happy that you wrote this for me ;;;; YOU WROTE RABIN (domestic, cheesy, college boyfriendssss) ;u;
it's okay that i had to wait haha, in the end i got this so i'm pleased. yes.

YOU JUST WENT AHEAD WITH THIS. THERE'S SO MANY THINGS THAT I NEED TO POINT OUT OH GOD.

you mentioned the tattoos, you went there, with the touching and the kissing and and and aND. you did. i am not okay. i'm not. I HAVE DREAMED ABOUT THIS. still sobbing because hongbin wore wonshik's shirt and they were so cute and fluffy and wonshik made food ;;;
and ughhh, the cuddles ;; sleepy hongbin :cc /I'M CRYING/
(also screaming at hongbin riding wonshik i am weaK, END MY MISERY PLS

[softboys]

[theafterimages]

WAILS I love this!! The characterization all around is so good. You really hit their dynamic on the head for me. ;; I really, really enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing it!

[softboys]

!!!!!!!!
i'm so nervous whenever i post a pairing/ship for the first time because i'm not sure if i write them right or if these characterizations only are in my head. I'm so glad you think they are okay ;;!!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it really, really means a lot to me! ;;

[carcharias1130]

AAAUGH ITS SO CUTE AND FLUFFY IM GONNA D I E
Bless you for writing ridiculously fluffy rabean, this is just...so nice. I love how soft and slow it feels, even the sex is mostly kind of a low, hot simmer more than anything--but still really sexy. I think it's the focus on little details, the way you write touch, the drawn-out descriptions of Hongbin--it's all very slow and reverent, which I guess makes sense because Wonshik is a gigantic sap.

I particularly love how you had them play off of each other, how Wonshik is so in love and Hongbin knows it, takes advantage a little, but not too much. I love how they keep mimicking each other, and how pouty Hongbin is.

This was so sweet, no real plot, just a wonderful warm soak in fluffy, sexy, sappy rabean. S i g h
Thank you for writing this and posting it. <3

[softboys]

AAA MADDIEEEEE

ahdkjhadkska thank you ;;;; yeah i see them as this ridiculously fluffy couple. Hongbin is the boss and Wonshik trails happily after him and they're really in love, despite how it might seem that Hongbin doesn't care as much about Wonshik as Wonshik does for Hongbin? But Wonshik is just a ridiculous softie who wears his heart on his sleeve and has to declare his love every other second.

no real plot is what i do best tbh. plot is my weakness and i don't think i'll ever be able to write something that's plotty, sadly.

thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! ;;;; it really, really means a lot to me <3

[naegastar]

Rabean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soft, lovey dovey, whispered "I love yous" and reverent touches Rabean!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love how they interact in this so much, sweet sweet Wonshik and lovingly teasing Hongbin ♥
Taekwoon as protective honorary big bro and Hakyeon as the distracting savior for Rabean was a super cute addition as well c:

[softboys]

;;;;;;;

yes i'm a softie for fluff and established love and ;; Rabin are kinda like that? touchy-feely. Especially Wonshik, lol. I was afraid that Taekwoon maybe was a little bit over the top, but I can see him be really protective ;;

Thank you for reading and commenting!!!! ;;; it really means a lot to me ;v; <3

[springmaid]

Ahhhh! I read this the other day and it's just so so *___*
Why do I imagine Hongbin like this, like a giant brat who has a knack for cuddles then turning it into passionate love making.
Wonshik seems so tired in this. I can imagine it tbh bc all of vixx looks so tired lately.
BUT GIANT BB HONGBIN HIBERNATING AND WAKING UP JUST TO GREET HIS BOYFRIEND. CUTE.

Overprotective Taek too! *_*
Brilliant idea, Hongbin. Lure Taekwoon to the other giant bb hyukkie so he can get distracted and both him and Hakyeon can pet hyukkie. :3

thanks for this! :)