Baby, I.

[softboys]

Title: Baby, I.
Pairing: Joonmyun/Zitao, briefly hinted Zitao/Sehun.
Rating: NC-17.
Word count: 4,9k.
Warnings: pwp, attempt at ~feelings, rimming, cursing.
Summary: Showering with Zitao is never just showering.
Notes: All errors are my own. I've been listening to GOT7's 고백송 on repeat while writing this so the title is from there. This was

Comments

[naegastar]

Omg omg ok this was so much!!!!!! Soooooooooo muuuuuuuuuch!!!!!!! Poor, tired Suho god I could practically feel his exhaustion from how you described him in the beginning. The surprise when Tao walks out of the bathroom and THIS. REACTION. Time with Zitao needs to be prepared, planned. Joonmyun needs a plan at all times so he won’t act or do anything unfit. I kinda made a choked squeaking noise because reluctant Suho in sutao is so nice...so so nice

The shower ok, Tao mouthing along his abs while leader scratches and massages his scalp I'm fine I'm perfectly fine, I lied I'm on FIRE.

AND I REMAIN ON FIRE FOR THE REST OF THE FIC B/C H O L Y S H I T. It's so hot!!!!! But also feelings!!!!!! Everywhere!!!!!! Baby boy!!!!!!!!

I love ♥

[softboys]

Joonmyun in this is me tbh, I need to prepare myself for Zitao.

Demanding Zitao gives me life tbh! Baby craves attention and Suho gives it ;v;

I TRIED WITH THE FEELINGS, i'm still not very versed in feelings and smut tbh.

SOSB THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND COMMENTING <3

[keika_love]

god damn this was an amazing read!! there is just so much love in this fic I got emotional <3
the use of "baby boy" is my weakness and I loved it so much.
I can totally imagine tao grinning when he pulled out the condoms and the lube.
the way you wrote the sex scenes were so lovely and you could feel the emotion so well!

thank you! very, very well done <3

sutao is my otp of otps and I miss them so much ;;
and I think you hit their personalities spot on

[softboys]

holy shit your icon!!!!!!!!

i wrote this trying to please my friend's kinks but I love that you liked it as well ;v; It's always nice to write something that tickles someone's fancy ;;;;;;

sobs thank you so much for your kind words ;;; I really appreciate it tbh!! <3 ;;;

[oneforyourfire]

[softboys]

that gif though baby suho ;;;;

but i'm soooo glad you liked it bbb!! ;; i tried to put all your favorite kinks in there and i'm not sure if i succeeded but ??? i tried??? and also sutao is kinda painful but suprisingly easy to write, especially from suho's pov bc baby tao deserves all the love and just? ?;

thank you so much for your kind words and the a+ gif ;;;;

your comment is so long i feel like i don't deserve it ,;;

i love you~

[tiggie0307]

lord have mercy i almost forgot i had work to do trying to read this. Good thing i work at night XD

Suho enjoying Tao calling him Hyung and Tao enjoying Suho calling him baby boy I DIE This was so fucking good.

[softboys]

dahjashdahjdsa i'm so sorry you read this at work?????? i hope it was worth it ;;;

thank you so much for reading and commenting! it really means a lot to me ;;;;

[carcharias1130]

I said I would comment earlier but then...actual work...happened...at work... :(

BUT I AM HERE NOW and my god this was hot. I don't think you screwed up their personalities at all, and I really liked the bit about jm having to prepare to handle tao, i mean tao is so....much all the time i feel like even someone not infatuated with tao like jm is in here would have to prepare. So no, I think you did a really great job, especially the bits about tAO TRYING TO BE SMALLEr yeah ok i'm fine, that's just my heart on the floor.

Joonmyun kisses Zitao the way Zitao deserves to be kissed this and the whole section right after it, I had my face in my hands on the train I couldn't, it's too sweet and warm and I couldn't control my face, how do you do this.

"baby boy" and “Please, hyung, I’m - call me your -" and then he comes--just fuck right off, why must you, I'm so

[softboys]

maddie don't stress it tbh! ;;;;;

just the fact that you read it is more than enough for me tbh! ;;;;

Yeah i feel like tao would try to make himself smaller bc he wants to be babied and you kind of maybe have to be smaller for that and idk i'm not making any sense rn ;;;;

well i try to..idk write good descriptions and i feel like touch is important? especially in pwp, lol. ;;

thank you so much for reading and commenting bb! ;;;;; i really appreciate it<3