Wish of the Fallen Angel

[softy3140]

I wrote this story first in Chinese, several people told me it's pretty good so I thought I'll go ahead and try to translate it into English.
There might be some cultural differences in the story, since it is based on Taiwan's education background, and I know there will be grammar mistakes, so please don't hesitate to correct me if you've seen any

Comments

[89raspberry]

I love the the first paragraph. It is sooo true!

I didnt think that seth and emily would end up togeather but that was a good supprise!!! so sweet!

[softy3140]

r u talking about the 1st paragraph of the story or my entry? XD lol

really? i'm glad it became a sweet surprise! yay! ^-^

[89raspberry]

Black stands for effort.
White stands for success.
In between them, the color that stands for stopping, one that kept trying but still fail in the end, it is Grey.
That, is the color of the Fallen Angel...

[softy3140]

i c! i'm glad u agree w/ it! :)

i like that paragraph a lot too! ^-^