Same Shit, Different Day

Nov 08, 2007 20:39

I'm posting more often (per request). The bulk of this entry is really just going to be a poem. Tell me what you think. Or don't ( Read more... )

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madcircleskills November 9 2007, 04:01:55 UTC
aw, i love you alot. i think i got most of it (both the poem and the writing)... maybe?

SSDD. <3

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sohalia88 November 9 2007, 04:33:38 UTC
<333 Love you, too.

Uh... maybe. To a degree at least. *shrugs* I'm not sure if I get it all, really, because they can both be about several things. *nodds*

*love*

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misoka_strife November 9 2007, 04:31:26 UTC
I'm not going to lie and say I know exactly what your poem is talking about, but it's beautifully abstract. Nelj definitely has a way with words.

I LOVE this stanza: I never knew how to dance
And I’d forgotten how to cry
But you learn and you remember
When you’re stepping on bits of glass
Scattered in the room like so many nightmares
Or macabre confetti for fate’s birthday party
Why clean up, when you weren’t even invited?
To keep you from getting hurt, of course
So you’ll never have to step on the pieces

And this line: But who am I to change routine
When routine lets me hide in the wings
Even though I’ve been cut
If I can’t be in the show
At least I can stay backstage

I loves you. ♥

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sohalia88 November 9 2007, 04:36:38 UTC
^_^ I usually don't write poetry for people to know what I'm talking about. XP Hannah's just IN MY BRAIN! ^_~ I'm glad you like it, though. =^_^=

Yeah, this poem just made it into the stack for a few I might read tomorrow. I'm not sure which I'll end up choosing.

I love you, too! <333 *glomp*

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