Comments | sojourner_cries: Casual Luncheon (Gravitation fanfic)

sojourner_cries

Casual Luncheon (Gravitation fanfic)

Feb 16, 2007 19:52

It is *a* Gravi fic! Not *the* Gravi fic, but a Gravi fic! Yay!

Heavily inspired by Ed Harcourt's "Metaphorically Yours" (but doesn't really follow it, hence it is not a song-fic) and written while listening to his CD "From Every Sphere" over and over again. (Although I don't really recommend this CD. No, I don't get it either O.o ( Read more... )

prose, real-life, gravitation, public, writing 2007, slash, fanfic, oneshot

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kuroi_inochi February 25 2007, 18:58:49 UTC

*surfaces from under a rock* Hi!!!!! Long time no see! How are you doing??
Gravi fic!! yay!!! This is very, very pretty ^u^
Antagonistic love makes me happy, as does anything with Yuki in it. I have to say, I like Tohma a lot more than I like Shuichi XD
And I also noticed no tense mistakes (do you have trouble with tenses? XD)
What's up with *the* Gravi fic, though, eh? :P

sojourner_cries February 25 2007, 23:32:34 UTC

Hi!!! I am good! How are you?
Thank you!
I don't like Tohma O.o . He's creepy, but he's easier for me to write than Shuichi (I am terrified of messing Shu up :P ).
When I write in present tense, I have problems figuring out if I'm using tenses correctly lol. I have fewer problems in past tense.
*The* Gravi fic is... uh... *shifty eyes* well, I need to sort it out because my brain is trying to shove more stuff into it. There is a mental list O.o . And I need to decide if I want to venture into smutness (.........) or not.
But! I did write another Gravi fic!
Except that it is kind of dead, in the sense that I should never be allowed to write an AU songfic ever again. Especially not one in which my pairing is Yuki/Eiri.
(Break is killing my brain :( .)
So I need to decide whether to work more with it or not, because I do think that the idea is decent, but it's difficult O.o .
What have you been writing lately?

kuroi_inochi February 26 2007, 19:22:08 UTC

I am also good, thanks!! Except for the dire straits of having my bathroom taken out (again) so we can get it tiled. So I have no shower. Or bath. Or anything. *sobs*
You won't mess Shu up!!!!! I have faith in you! Be daring! :P
Ahh I see. When I write something in past tense and then go write something in present tense, I always get confused and mix the two up >.< It's silly! It shouldn't be confusing to write in your own language lol ( ... )

sojourner_cries February 28 2007, 01:11:00 UTC

That's okay! We haven't talked in weeks O.o ( ... )

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