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This is just a small off comment and I don't mind if you leave it screened. I noticed reading your post that Haer'dalis used "jeez" and it jarred me. It doesn't seem to fit with his usual lingo, which I normally very much enjoy reading.
I truly apologize. Haer'Dalis does not in fact cannonically use Jeez... at all. When he get's flustered in my head, he starts to use words that he should NOT be using, and that was a major slip up on my part. So I sincerly apologize on behalf of Haer'Dalis, and blame it on Terry and his teenage language >_> Only not really. But yes, you're right, Jeez is a rather out of character thing for Haer'Dalis to say. I originally had him saying Sheesh, but for some reason my autocorrect kicked in. But even then, he like wouldn't have even said sheesh.
It's okay! It's only a small nitpick but I figured I should point it out in case you didn't notice and such. I actually love his usual speech and erudition/tl;dr and whatnot. It's so distinctive! Which is probably why something like 'jeez' came up as jarring to me.
I'm actually glad you pointed it out, slip ups like that can really cost me in the long run, if I don't catch them at the source. It could have turned into some form of habit without me even realizing it o_O And that would horribly butcher a wonderful character.
Glad you like my Haer'Dalis otherwise though. I hadn't actually known if anyone was actually reading some of the stuff I write xD
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(Has just disgraced the soul of Haer'Dalis)
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Glad you like my Haer'Dalis otherwise though. I hadn't actually known if anyone was actually reading some of the stuff I write xD
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