Original Formula

[sol7up]

Coca-Cola

With a cool crack comes the commercialism
And drained is the soul to the container.
Dictated by society and sheep

The red can mocks its' victims with a shiny,
Mirror-like haul.
A refreshing liquid to cool the addiction
That has risen deep within.

The headache parts, the mind is free,
Only to shine again another day.

Dave.

Pat?

Comments

uhhhhh...........

[keldawg20n16y]

Dave......????????????

-confused-----but i guess that's ok.........its LJ!!!!!!

peace out
Kel

[keldawg20n16y]

i'd say that this entry was lame/pointless/DUMB...etc.etc...but i dont think it was to u...so i'll keep my mouth shut....

;-)

peace out again....(for real this time...lol)
kel

freak

[keldawg20n16y]

what is your issue-- do you always have to be such a bit*c?? what is up ith you-- i am sorry if your life sucks or something, but grow up- everyone has issues, and you cannot use a f-ed up life as an excuse to be a jerk all the time. grow up raquel

Re: freak

[keldawg20n16y]

You obviously dont know me that well, cuz if u did u would have known i was joking. it was an inside joke..do u know what that is? And about my life, i'm not asking for sympathy dipshit. I'm using LJ for the reason it's used for....writing about yer feelings. So shut yer mouth and we'll all get along.

Oh, and maybe u should get the balls to say who u are instead of being 'anonymous'....it's stupid how u cant face me. How 'bout u take yer own advice....and grow up.