Ashes, an Avatar: the last Airbender fanfic

Apr 27, 2008 17:26

The fire in the hearth consumes the paper in a matter of moments; curling and crumbling, reduced to ashes by the time Azula arrives.

“I must extend my apologies for Zuzu’s behavior.” Azula’s eyes flicker towards the fire and the sides of her lips twist in a smile. “It must hurt that he didn’t say goodbye. Just like all those years ago.”

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writing, avatar: the last airbender

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scriva April 28 2008, 17:17:20 UTC
I found your story by coincidence and I just wanted to say that it feels perfect to me. All those bottled up emotions.

You have really good grip on Mai, in my opinion.

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solace_adrift April 28 2008, 18:52:27 UTC
Thanks for reading. Yeah, I was trying to go for a minimalist style. Glad it worked.

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scriva April 29 2008, 06:57:58 UTC
Did you write other Avatar fics? Or fics for Blade of the Immortal?

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solace_adrift May 18 2008, 22:26:27 UTC
Thanks. They sounded pretty good on Sickfish, didn’t they? I read your submission to, it was really good.

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estrella_blanca May 19 2008, 00:24:28 UTC
I also got here from the podcast~ :D

I certainly enjoyed this! Burning the portrait was just so deep. *claps* Congratulations on winning!

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solace_adrift May 19 2008, 04:36:37 UTC
Glad you liked it :)

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solace_adrift May 19 2008, 23:36:34 UTC
Thanks. I always feel that it’s important to get the dialogue right, because a lot of a characters personality manifests in the nuances of how they talk.

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