Fic: Lunch Dating // For boomingvoice

Nov 30, 2008 23:30

Title: Lunch Dating
Pairing: Cookleta, with Jackie and Jason Castro cameos
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1967
Summary: Um. Mostly dialogue, Jackie Castro being adorable and thirteen, and Jason facepalming. Also, David Archuleta thinks that they all don't know.

A/N: Okay, so. I never really have anything to post here but a few nights ago I was ( Read more... )

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popcultaddict December 1 2008, 10:08:30 UTC
The whole mono passage killed me. XD

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solacedoll December 2 2008, 01:40:45 UTC
bahaha. aw. yay. [:

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alaszyel December 1 2008, 10:18:52 UTC
SO MUCH LOVE. I hope you write more!!!

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solacedoll December 2 2008, 01:42:09 UTC
i hope to write more, too! nah, i don't know, i'm not too disciplined in my writing, so sometimes i can writewritewrite intensely, and other times, i don't feel like it. haha.

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alaszyel December 2 2008, 14:09:23 UTC
I know exactly how you feel; I'm the same way. It's like writing!frenzy and then I'm on a muse-imposed hiatus.

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lc_writings December 1 2008, 11:17:55 UTC
Too funny. I'm LOLing aloud right now, and it's not doing my reputation at the office any good.

Really impresive, can we have more, please?

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solacedoll December 2 2008, 01:43:12 UTC
really? haha that is amusing. makes me feel somewhat evol. like e-v-o-l.

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boomingvoice December 2 2008, 01:10:48 UTC
oh my GOSH. solacedoll, i. shit. this - i...DUDE.

okay, forget whatever i was trying to say up there, i will talk about the fic.

This was wonderful, and i LOVE how amazing you are at the crush thing. it's so fun and adorable and PAINFUL because AAAH CRUSHES, and poor Jackie! AND I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU. WAY TO JUST RANDOMLY MAKE MY DAY WITH NO WARNING. PLEASE CONTINUE THAT SORT OF THING. i am smiling so hard right now. oh my gosh. hahaha. i can't believe it.

but yeah. i love what you did with jackie there - that was complex, and you are really good. and i can't believe you did this!

They're going to be her fairytale, she can feel it in her bones, or maybe just her fluttering pulse.

That's a beautiful line.

ugh i can't believe you. you are wonderful. thank you.

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solacedoll December 2 2008, 01:48:15 UTC
haha, well. i mean, i feel like a bad lj friend or something, because i only have fic on this journal, and i never really update, but i do read my flist and stuff, so i feel the need to, like, have something at least for you to read. yayy but i am glad you liked. <3

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kal_ella December 2 2008, 05:16:31 UTC
oh jackie, just read some cookleta fics, you'll come around in no time. XD~~*

this was insanely cute and funny, bb. <3

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solacedoll December 31 2008, 07:03:30 UTC
i thought i'd replied to these! heh, sorry for the late reply, but i really appreciate you having taken the time to read this and feedback it too. [:

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