[FICLET] Hearing Between (Jackal/Marui; PG)

Apr 02, 2008 16:37

This one just wouldn't leave me alone, so I sat down to pound it out today. Enjoy, flist.

Shrimp Chips )

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descuidada April 3 2008, 12:51:27 UTC
It's been so long since I've had the chance to read one of your fics. I've missed reading them so much.

This is beautiful, Solan. ♥

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solanum_d April 3 2008, 14:02:02 UTC
Finding the time for fandom can be difficult. Believe me, I know.

Glad you liked it. ^_^ And thank you.

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descuidada April 3 2008, 14:18:36 UTC
Yeah. I love fandom a lot too.

I hope you're doing alright.

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pchan02 April 4 2008, 01:01:52 UTC
this is so wonderful.

who knew jackal could be a tease? then again bunta got him back without realizing it.

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solanum_d April 5 2008, 14:40:12 UTC
^___^

Thanks.

I think they can be very playful together.

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pchan02 April 5 2008, 16:53:48 UTC
your welcome.

yup, but i dont think most realize that. at least, i didnt.

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ensein April 4 2008, 14:33:57 UTC
Oh, this is sweet. For me, JaBun's always been about separation (I always thought Jackal would go back to Brazil at some point), although it was always Marui who I thought would worry about it more.

Marui flailing for chips was adorable, but somehow the parts that got to me the most were Different length legs. Different size feet. and the grass, for some reason.

♥ Lovely.

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solanum_d April 7 2008, 12:36:31 UTC
The reality of separation for them is something I've contemplated several times, on both sides. It's the codependency of doubles that gets to me. I tend to think that Jackal is a great big homebody and wherever he puts down roots is where he's going to stay. There's a thousand scenarios I could write and several that I've read. Some very good ones at that. Haha.

I'm glad that you liked the little details. Those are always my favorite parts.

Thank you.

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senshixdoukeshi April 4 2008, 18:56:28 UTC
Aw!~ That was so cute and poor Jackal is starting to realize that Marui might be so important to him for more than just friendship. It has a bit of an itch style edge with the creeping realization. ^_^ Liked it very much.

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solanum_d April 7 2008, 12:38:06 UTC
I live to cute. It's a nice change from the angsty kick I was on a week or so ago. XD

Thanks, babe, as always!

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