R-rated JaBun with tennis camp hijinks!

[solanum_d]

More Jackal/Marui!!! I actually got a super big kick out of writing this one. Tennis camp!!!

Comments

[gekidasa]

Yay, JaBun!

But he hadn't expected the run-down cabin in no-man's land. What were they? Seigaku?

Oh, SNAP! XD

This was awesome. I loved Marui, he's so pissy and bitchy. And the sex part was great. ¦Dv

[solanum_d]

Hahaha! I really hoped that people appreciated that Seigaku line. *grins* Don't get me wrong, I still love Seigaku, but still... XD

Glad you liked it. I felt like my Marui voice was strong. And who doesn't like a little smexing?

[cosmic_kath]

Wow. That was wonderful! *___*
loved all the character interactions, too ♥

[solanum_d]

Thanks! ^__^
I sometimes fear writing certain Rikkai characters, but I'm glad that it worked out this time. XD

[solanum_d]

Thanks so much! I'm more than happy to share, especially when receiving responses like yours. =^__^=

[solanum_d]

Thanks so much!
I really wanted to work little Kiri in there just a little. XD

[senshixdoukeshi]

Mmmmm, blasphemy in multiple religions. ^^ I love that about you. You write such awesome Jackal/Marui and boy is the sex hot! I know you've already told you in person how hot this is, but seriously, it's hot. I also love Niou in this and Marui and Niou's interactions. They make such good bitchy friends. I totally agree on the Yagyuu thing, he seems like he'd be a total goody-goody off the courts. Jackal's a bit of a goody-goody but that's ok. ^_^

[solanum_d]

I'm all about the hot. You know this. You know it well. Better than anyone. I actually didn't freak out over the appearances of the other characters in this one. It was kind of surprising actually. XD Jackal and Yagyuu get along because they're both goody-goodies. Jackal's just sexier while he's doing it.