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[solasura]

like nothing else

their gleaming cold steel
subtle are knives that severe
like dismemberment

wounds like maggots' meal
roses bloom where blood departs
like infestation

a single green leaf
missing out the entire forest
like obsession

Comments

defn of haiku

[egostriken]

haiku eh?
but "missing out the entire forest" seems eight syllabus while "like obsession" is four syllabus. is this allowed in haiku>

Re: defn of haiku

[solasura]

yup, as long as i dont exceed the maximum of 13 syllabuses in a verse.

glad someone asked! haha.

Re: defn of haiku

[solasura]

i mean 17. apparently, math isnt my strongest subject. =.=

Re: defn of haiku

[egostriken]

oh well i am worse. lol

to think i was so bored i go and count