Once upon a time (a fragmented tale)

[soleil_malia]

I saw a fic with a similar style and I'm a copycat xD. I tried to make the story interlocking, but I'm not too sure if I succeeded . Either way, I hope it's entertaining.

Once upon a time (a fragmented tale)

i. even if the world ended

Some say the world will end in ice, others proclaim it will end in fire. Roy Mustang was assured his would end in

Comments

[olliegami]

This is really cute~ but I have to point out that there are a few mistakes here and there~! Perhaps if you got someone to beta for you?

[soleil_malia]

I would love a beta, I just have whoever available to screen for edits.

Do you mind pointing out the errors? I'm oblivious to my own work xD

[anonymous]

I need to change the journal and was wondering if it was too bright for others.

I'm quite happy to know that you enjoyed it. (-grinning like there's no tomorrow-) I have plenty of ideas, some crackish to depressing, which I'm trying to avoid the latter because it seems too many of my drabbles are becoming that way.

Let me end this rambling, your English seems great to me, your ideas seems to come about smoothly.