I personally don't care. This is MY journal and therefore I am allowed to misspell one thing or another. If my English teacher ever saw this, I'm quite certain she would have commented on the poem itself rather than a word misspelled. Thanks for passing through. Goodbye.
I just think it was fairly rude to comment on the misspelling of a word rather than my fucking poetry. Seriously, if one cannot make a well thought out, pleasant statement regarding the contents of my journal, they can bloody well fuck off....
This is a poem? you're sure? Seemed like rather puerile (look up puerile, under 'p' in the dictionary) which explains big words) nonsense to me...lets try to be like trent reznor and maybe people will pay attention to me.
It struck me more as something a gradeschooler would come up with, but without the effort and imagination a gradeschooler would put into the endeavour. (now look up endeavour...under 'e' in the dictionary).
(for the record, a dictionary is a book(collection of paper all bound together)
If you're gonna attempt writing something that you're gonna call poetry, you should look into such concepts as rhyme schemes and meter.
Take care and think shiny happy thoughts... ...goths are so depressingly unoriginal
Re: Poetry...?soleildesadeJune 30 2003, 11:55:14 UTC
Yeah, really. Dumbass who wrote it should know that poetry is NOT limited to rhyme or meter. Ryming poetry is something a gradeschooler would do. People....get a FUCKING life! Argh!
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therefore I am allowed to misspell
one thing or another. If my English teacher ever
saw this, I'm quite certain she would have
commented on the poem itself rather than a word
misspelled.
Thanks for passing through. Goodbye.
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misspelling of a word rather than my fucking
poetry. Seriously, if one cannot make a well
thought out, pleasant statement regarding the
contents of my journal, they can bloody well fuck
off....
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Seemed like rather puerile (look up puerile, under 'p' in the dictionary) which explains big words) nonsense to me...lets try to be like trent reznor and maybe people will pay attention to me.
It struck me more as something a gradeschooler would come up with, but without the effort and imagination a gradeschooler would put into the endeavour. (now look up endeavour...under 'e' in the dictionary).
(for the record, a dictionary is a book(collection of paper all bound together)
If you're gonna attempt writing something that you're gonna call poetry, you should look into such concepts as rhyme schemes and meter.
Take care and think shiny happy thoughts...
...goths are so depressingly unoriginal
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that poetry is NOT limited to rhyme or meter.
Ryming poetry is something a gradeschooler would
do. People....get a FUCKING life! Argh!
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