Sun Dawn

[soleildesade]

Sun dawn;
A beautifule moment passes by
Bliss and warmth keep devotion
alive
A bittersweet parting as it
sets into the sea
The pain of loss
as my heart follows

9/14/05

Comments

[aisumasen]

I like it. I know you have very little time on your hands from working and all, so I look forward to looking in your journal for when you do update; I myself have very little time to visit on the net but whenever I do, your journal is one of the few sites I check on. Good poetry (Y)

~Matt

[soleildesade]

Wow, that's cool, thanx. i haven't been updating my journal much. i'm gonna have to get a second job soon and i just don't have the motivation. oh well, i'll try for it. i'm off the next few days, so we'll see if i find inspiration