Skeeter Chronicles Chapter Eight

[soleo_lion]

Title: Skeeter Chronicles
Rating: This chapter M
Author: SoLeo
Word Count: +1600
Warnings: *EWE, anal sex*
Disclaimer: You know I don't own them.
Summary: In which Rita Skeeter attempts to get the exclusive of a lifetime.
AN: I know I kinda dropped off this week, sorry, but this was really hard to write. Mostly because my kids kept interrupting,

Comments

[myk_myks]

Yes! Finally! :D I am as glad as Harry that Severus is spending the night with him. Very good and very hot, mmm.

[soleo_lion]

*^_^* thanks. I could feel myself blushing as I typed it up. but I'm proud of myself for getting it out there too.

[pekeleke]

Oh... when you told me the last time that I was going to enjoy your next chapter I must confess that I was really intrigued about what might be coming, but I wasn't expecting this...

Congratulations on writing your first (am I right in assuming that this one is your first, since I haven't ever read anything like this from you before?) sex scene, my friend.

I like how carefully you walked that very dangerous line between having your characters make love with each other and writing plain and simple porn. I loved Harry's blushing neediness and Severus' unacknowledged dazzled wonder at finding himself there, in Harry's bedroom, in Harry's arms, while feeling utterly desired.

All in all this chapter did live up to your promise to me. I enjoyed it greatly for both the romance that runs so very clearly through the entire scene and the closeness that brings to their developing relationship.

[soleo_lion]

Yes, this is my first full sex scene with them. and I like that you see them 'making love' it's not just sex for either of them.

Severus' unacknowledged dazzled wonder at finding himself there, in Harry's bedroom, in Harry's arms, while feeling utterly desired.
This description made me smile. Severus really isn't used to positive attention and Harry wanting him is wondrous.

Eventually Severus is going to figure out exactly how he feels about everything, but right now he's blissfully unaware that he's falling in love.