Unlocked Doors

Aug 23, 2013 12:09

Title: Unlocked Doors
Rating: G
Author: SoLeo
Word Count: 100
Challenge: snarry100 #364: Private
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: You know I don't own them.
Summary: Shopping sprees aren’t meant for everyone.

Unsure of how he had done it exactly, Severus had agreed to go with Harry to muggle London for some shopping. Now he was waiting and bored for ( Read more... )

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accioslash August 23 2013, 20:16:54 UTC
Bwhahahaha! Well, I guess we know why Severus agreed to go shopping. ;D

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soleo_lion August 23 2013, 21:23:40 UTC
Totally! A bored Severus is a terrible thing. ^_^

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myk_myks August 23 2013, 20:33:40 UTC
I bet it was best shopping ever :D

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soleo_lion August 23 2013, 21:24:22 UTC
Yup. he's bringing him every time from now on!

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alisanne August 24 2013, 18:13:22 UTC
Ahahaah! Nice. Clever Severus is clever. *g*

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soleo_lion August 24 2013, 18:26:53 UTC
Hehe, a Slytherin takes advantage of any situation. *bow-chicka*

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pekeleke August 27 2013, 14:22:03 UTC
OMG, LOL. Your boys definitely know how to have fun while shopping.:D

I think the thing I loved the most about this drabble is how finding a secluded space to have a little forbidden one-off with his partner wasn't Severus' original intention. He was just bored and idly curious when he peeped inside that room.

The situation that developed from there was completely spontaneous and that added a charming sense of that kind of natural sort of... naughtiness... that sometimes sparks from out of nowhere between partners who have been together for a very long time. This was very cleverly done. A really fresh interpretation of this particular prompt that I simply adored. :D

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soleo_lion August 27 2013, 14:41:30 UTC
Thank you pekeleke. I do try to bring a fresh perspective to prompts - at least as far as things that I've never read (because this fandom has been around for so long and I have only been apart of it about a year).

I liked that 'naughtiness' - very cheeky of Severus, and fun! which is something Harry brings out in him.

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