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Pledge

Sep 24, 2013 20:03

Title: Pledge
Rating: R
Author: SoLeo
Word Count: Approx. 1100
Warnings: *Harry/OC*
Disclaimer: You know I don't own them.
Summary: Severus suffers an accident, but makes the most of life.
AN: This came to me, and I had to share it, so excuse me if it’s not polished. He’s not sure how his life came to this. How he drew this particular path of fate ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

majmunka September 25 2013, 03:37:00 UTC

It's beautiful. Harry's persistent and his unwavering love earns its reward. Lovely ficlet <3

soleo_lion September 25 2013, 03:53:37 UTC

Thank you. I'm thrilled that you liked it.

myk_myks September 29 2013, 07:49:14 UTC

Don't you think that Harry and Severus have the most beautiful love story ever?
I really like it, but it is not a surprise x)

soleo_lion September 29 2013, 14:08:05 UTC

They are wonderful. As I wrote this I felt it was more of an outline for a full fledged story - but I didn't want to take the time to flush it out. I can only concentrate on one story at a time >

pekeleke September 30 2013, 15:47:18 UTC

This was a truly haunting piece. I could feel their terrible heartbreak as the situation in which they found themselves began to unfold.

I admired both Harry's determination to hold on to Severus, no matter how hard life became, and Severus' selfless generosity in attempting to fulfill Harry's sexual needs, even if that meant using a surrogate. Your description of how those encounters actually happened was both extremely romantic and absolutely heartbreaking in a way that enhanced the depth of our boys' seemingly bottomless devotion for one another.

I must confess that I sighed with relief when you finally put Severus on the way to recovery, though. I realize that his healing is something of a miracle and that it won't happen overnight, but I'm glad that they are back to being just the two of them. Without a third party in the middle, no matter how necessary that might have been for both of them in the past.

Beautifully angsty, tender and romantic. This was a breathtakingly gorgeous piece, soleo.

soleo_lion September 30 2013, 16:55:24 UTC

I felt this could have been drawn out - an angsty multi chaptered monster - but I was still in the middle of Skeeter Chronicles and didn't want to take away my focus.

but I'm glad for being what it was it still had that heartbreaking feeling and the devotion to each other very evident. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it pekeleke.