Supplicant Romeo

Aug 01, 2013 23:22

Title: Supplicant Romeo
Rating: G
Author: SoLeo
Word Count: 100 x3
Challenge: snarry100 #358: Valentine’s Day
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: You know I don't own them.
Summary: Harry tries his best to get Severus to give him a chance.

“Potter, what is this drivel!” Severus arrived in Harry’s office and slams down a paper on his desk.

“It’s a ( Read more... )

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alisanne August 3 2013, 01:13:12 UTC
Heh. Of course Severus had to give him a hard time. Luckily, he's also no fool and knows how to take advantage of a situation. :)
Very nice!

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soleo_lion August 5 2013, 14:24:58 UTC
very Slytherin of him actually.
Thank you

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pekeleke August 8 2013, 15:22:00 UTC
OMG... I don't know if I should laugh wildly at Harry's horrible Valentine or coo like a romantic Hufflepuff at Severus' efforts to comfort him.

I loved how this starts out like a comedy and then turns serious and romantic in the second paragraph. Severus is able to see Harry's dejection here and his willingness to move their relationship further, after some proper Slytherin negotiations, is a very good sign. He is ready to let Harry in, isn't he? I'm hopeful that their planned dinner date will be the very first of many.

This was both hilariously funny and heart-meltingly romantic. A perfect pick-me-up read. :D

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soleo_lion August 8 2013, 15:49:14 UTC
I wanted a better - or should I say worse - valentine, but couldn't think of something appropriate ><

and since Severus agreed to the first date, unless it's spectacularly horrible, I'm sure they'll have plenty more where that came from ^_^

*^_^* I'm so glad you liked it.

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agneskamilla August 21 2013, 14:48:54 UTC
HAhahahahaha, that poem is just, OMG, no words for that, really. I'm so glad that Severus took the situation into his capable hands:)
Very nice and funny!

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soleo_lion August 21 2013, 16:38:23 UTC
I tried to think of the cheesiest thing I could for that poem. I'm glad it made you laugh.

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