That was sooo kawaii~~ BTW, I know Kyo's favorite ice cream is Mint Chocolate~ XD I dont know Ruki's. I loved this, and it wasn't OOC, it was nice and Kyo was soo cocky like I like him~ And I wish you would continue this~ *flails* Anyways! Thank you for this!!
So I'm partially to blame, eh? Makes me feel proud! *grins evilly*
Ah~ I really loved this. They were both so perfect and the whole situation was adorable. And then you had to write it so beautifully...I was giggling like mad. -lol- I don't think either one are really out of character, besides all fanfictions have them out of character anyway. But you did a great job. Hope to see more soon.
As for writing it, -Blows Raspberry- I managed to go and fix a bunch of mistakes without changing it entirely... -Le sigh- The rough draft would've given you a heart attack. ^^;
Thank you very much! ^^ -Bows- I hope to get more done, soon, too. ^^
*nods* Very much so...Though I'm not exactly sure what I did in the first place to cause this. -lol-
I'm sure it wasn't as bad as you're making it out to be. I have some pretty bad rough drafts as well so it probably wouldn't have shocked me too much. XDDD
Yes, would be nice reading more from you. And now I go back to working on...*whispers* A new oneshot. ^__^
You existed. We'll just leave it at that. ^^ (Really, it was the cake shop. I just turned it into\ice cream because I didn't have a clue how to finish it after they met. Poor guys would've been sitting on that bench forever. XD)
I dunnno... ^^ I once almost sent one of my betas to an early grave because of a rough draft. XD
I'm working on another one-shot as well, but I also have a few multi-parters in mind. ^^
That's some good Kyo/Ruki. Haa, I was giggling through the majority of this. And the way you ended it was perfect.
It didn't seem to be OOC to me, in fact, the characterizations seemed to suit them. It seems so...what's the word...that Kyo was having throat problems. He always has those, doesn't he? And I love the casual way Ruki dealt with spraining his wrist. *laughs*
The kisses melted me a little. I really like how you wrote them. Geez, I wish my writing was this good. And that my humor wasn't the morbid little thing it is. .___.
Yeah, I've read a few interviews with Kyo-san, and in all of them, he's having problems with his throat. xD;;; DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED. *laughs* Ruki is so clumsy.
*nervous laugh* My stuff is quite fucked up. Speaking of my writing, I need to get another Ruki/Kyo story up here soon. .____. I just gotta finish writing it. You do? Well, that's good! *nervous laugh*
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I'm glad you don't think it's ooc. ^^; Ish been a while since I wrote some Kyo/Ruki. Good to know my skill aren't completely rusty. XD
Thanks for reading, and your welcome! =D Sadly, not all one-shots can be made into multi-parters... v_v
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I'm glad Kyo-san is not out of character. XD Thank you very much! -Bows-
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Ah~ I really loved this. They were both so perfect and the whole situation was adorable. And then you had to write it so beautifully...I was giggling like mad. -lol- I don't think either one are really out of character, besides all fanfictions have them out of character anyway. But you did a great job. Hope to see more soon.
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As for writing it, -Blows Raspberry- I managed to go and fix a bunch of mistakes without changing it entirely... -Le sigh- The rough draft would've given you a heart attack. ^^;
Thank you very much! ^^ -Bows- I hope to get more done, soon, too. ^^
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I'm sure it wasn't as bad as you're making it out to be. I have some pretty bad rough drafts as well so it probably wouldn't have shocked me too much. XDDD
Yes, would be nice reading more from you. And now I go back to working on...*whispers* A new oneshot. ^__^
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I dunnno... ^^ I once almost sent one of my betas to an early grave because of a rough draft. XD
I'm working on another one-shot as well, but I also have a few multi-parters in mind. ^^
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That's some good Kyo/Ruki. Haa, I was giggling through the majority of this. And the way you ended it was perfect.
It didn't seem to be OOC to me, in fact, the characterizations seemed to suit them. It seems so...what's the word...that Kyo was having throat problems. He always has those, doesn't he? And I love the casual way Ruki dealt with spraining his wrist. *laughs*
The kisses melted me a little. I really like how you wrote them. Geez, I wish my writing was this good. And that my humor wasn't the morbid little thing it is. .___.
Er, anyway, I really loved this. Great job~
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Yesh, I remember Kyo having a lot of them. ^^ And Ruki was cool, but a bit of a kluts on the nlsg tour. XD
Awww, I'm sure your writing is just fine! ^^ -tries to poke herself into it-Er... If ever I were to read it. XD -waves arms- I love morbid humor! XD
Thank you ver much for the review! -bows-
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Yeah, I've read a few interviews with Kyo-san, and in all of them, he's having problems with his throat. xD;;; DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED. *laughs* Ruki is so clumsy.
*nervous laugh* My stuff is quite fucked up. Speaking of my writing, I need to get another Ruki/Kyo story up here soon. .____. I just gotta finish writing it. You do? Well, that's good! *nervous laugh*
You're very welcome~
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Yesh, more Kyoki! More Kyoki! XD I'll be waiting for it!
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