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[sombersilence]

Story Title: Amish Paradise

Chapter: One, revised...*cough*

Written by: Amber (sombersilence/sleeplesselixer)

Pairing: Benji/Joel...twincest, baby!

Rating: Eventually NC-17

Summary: AU Prep Benji goes shopping in Lancaster with his friends Sandy, Missy, and Pierre (from Simple Plan) and meets one hell of an Amish boy, Joel Combs.

Comments

[poetic_symphony]

Hmmm..I still like it. I mean...I already liked the first version and I still don't know why you had to revise the chapter?!?!

Ok, ok...the format is definitly a lot better and it's easier to read but the content has already been good and interesting before...

The only things that's confusing me is the amount of names in theís first chapter...I mean...Benji, Joel, Sandy, Katie, Pierre, Missy, Chris, Benjamin, Daniel....Huh???!? This definitly is confusing...

Whatever...I love twincest so I'm kind of sure I'm going to love this fic as well ;)

Btw..have you ever thought of writing a Benji/Pierre-Fic? *evil grin*

[sombersilence]

Hehe yeah I love Benji/Pierre but I'm not gonna start any more fics til I finish one, mister! lol

Humm yeah it's a lot of names, but the siblings are minor characters, and Missy and Sandy will be gone soon.

David and Pierre are, of course, from Simple Plan, so they won't be hard to remember.

And then the twins. How could you forget them, right?

So you'll be fine, don't worry!

[alldone1]

Ooh!About the Benji/Pierre thing.Have you seen the video for the concert for Asia aid for the tsunami with GC and SP? If you have did you notice when Pie and Joel walk past Benji, Benji is so obviously checking out Pierres ass! If you havent seen it you have to! I downloaded it on my computer from a site called Ares.com
You have to check it out.Maybe you can think of a good plot bunny from it!

[sombersilence]

Heh I've seen it, though I didn't notice that. I should watch it again! :) Thanks

[cheeken1979]

i feel bad! im so lazy, i skimmed over this one. but i did read the original one. and this is so cute almost? i dont know what word to use. but i do like the story...so post more please!