The Way You Make Me Feel (1/1)

[somedayxxbway]

Okay, so first off I'd like to say that I'm really nervous to post this because I have never written or published smut before I wrote this. So please don't judge me/eat my babies. That said...

Title: The Way You Make Me Feel
Author: somedayxxbway  (Jess)
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Arizona and Callie need to figure out just where they are--and

Comments

[annakate250]

that was. wow. haaa i'm speechless! really hot. but sweet too!! really good, especially if that was your first time writing stuff like that!

[somedayxxbway]

Thanks. I was really nervous publishing it but I'm glad you liked it! :)

[itsallcomealive]

Could we have your fanfiction played on screen ? Please, Shonda ?

Because that was ... GREAT ! You captured the emotions in a perfect way - Arizona's nervousness at first, then all the feelings during the talk - I absolutely love your describing skills.

And had you not mentionned that it's the first time you write an NC-17, I wouldn't have noticed. Very well done.

I would dare say : ENCORE !

PS : I laughed aloud when I came to the part where Callie tries to send Cristina her text message. Too much fun. :D

[somedayxxbway]

Thankyouthankyou! :) I dunno how soon I'll post, as you put it, an encore, but maybe. :P

[mcseriously101]

that was really really hot.
/\*(^_^)*/\

[somedayxxbway]

Bah. Thanks. ^_^

[sydneygirl1903]

your first attempt on smut? i am very impressed. i say you should try again ;) this was so sweet and funny and sexy as hell. i loved it!

[somedayxxbway]

Yayy, thank you! :D

[nncyl72]

Oh wow!
this was just so real!
Damn near perfect!!
Knowing how much these ladies love each other this was just so real for them.
I can feel the love and lust just reading it!
Great job!!

[somedayxxbway]

Thanks so much! :)