until there is nothing left of us [1/?]

Mar 06, 2010 00:04

BREAK OPEN UP YOUR HEART FOR ME
[verse] established dean/castiel, sam, bobby, ofc. rated pg-13. ~7,000
Two months and sixteen days after the world stops, they drive North.
(c) title from a world completely of our own by dandelion wine

a/n: first segment in until there is nothing left of us [ masterpost/more info]. endless thanks to thevinegarworks for listening ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, verse: until there is nothing left of us, pairing: dean/castiel, fandom: supernatural

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vichan March 6 2010, 06:23:28 UTC
I am in love with this line:
Dean likes Castiel because he's reliable and wrongly important, unpredictable in ways that are irrelevant and annoying, in ways that Dean needs when Castiel frames his face with his hands and kisses his eyes.

Also, ♥ all around this fic. It's not an ending that's all nice and neat and wrapped up in a bow, but it's definitely pure happiness in the way Winchesters do it.

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devilyouwere March 6 2010, 16:38:23 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading. And I don't think I could do perfect happiness--even thinking about the stories that are going to come after this one, it won't be perfect. But I'm good with that :)

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chewysun March 6 2010, 08:07:20 UTC
oh. oh. your language, your description, *everything* made me sigh.

and damn, did that last little bit just sucker punch me in my sappy little heart. <3 adored this so much.

fave = swollen seconds of the almost forgotten

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devilyouwere March 6 2010, 16:39:27 UTC
*g* Thank you so much!

I'm glad the last part worked for you. I thought it would be ~cheesy, but the image just kind of grabbed hold of me and I couldn't let go.

Gah, thank you so much for the lovely comment! :D

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thevinegarworks March 6 2010, 09:12:02 UTC
My favorite part was everything, but you knew that already.

No, really, I just want to draw hearts and hang rainbows all over this fic. This universe you've created for them is nothing short of amazing, perfect, yet it's not overly saccharine and it's still true to the characters and they are still wonderfully flawed. But at the core, they're happy because they're together.

(I know you're going to make me sniffle with the next part, omg~)

But this part, oh. It's such a beautiful beginning and I can't wait to see what you do with it next, even though I BASICALLY KNOW THIS FIC AS MUCH AS YOU DO, WTFH.

Ilu, you're incredible, never stop. ♥~~~

ps; I heartily approve of you blaming me for the 'verse in your masterpost! I CAN NOW SAY WITH CERTAINTY THAT I HAVE ACHIEVED SOMETHING GREAT IN MY LIFE. :D :D :D

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devilyouwere March 6 2010, 16:42:20 UTC
O rly? :P

I want rainbows on my fic. And it really means a lot to hear that people actually enjoy it and that it's actually in character because that's what really worried me. But yay for ICness and happiness!

(Good, mwahaha!)

I just want to write this forever, so it might go up sooner than expected. And it will definitely be shorter than this one because now it's going to be snapshot-like stories. /ramble I CAN JUST TELL YOU THIS LATER.

I'll try? ♥♥

YOU WILL ACHIEVE GREATER THINGS. But thank you! :D

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heartsonwings March 6 2010, 09:17:58 UTC
OMG *SQUEAL* EEEE, I love it so much!! :D
It's all happy and cute and beautiful <33333 *mems*

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devilyouwere March 6 2010, 16:42:45 UTC
*claps* I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading :D

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harper47 March 6 2010, 12:39:14 UTC
What a lovely story. Full of poetry and images that linger in your brain.

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devilyouwere March 6 2010, 16:44:13 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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