Comments | somemyth: until there is nothing left of us [1/?]

devilyouwere in somemyth

until there is nothing left of us [1/?]

Mar 06, 2010 00:04

BREAK OPEN UP YOUR HEART FOR ME
[verse] established dean/castiel, sam, bobby, ofc. rated pg-13. ~7,000
Two months and sixteen days after the world stops, they drive North.
(c) title from a world completely of our own by dandelion wine

a/n: first segment in until there is nothing left of us [ masterpost/more info]. endless thanks to thevinegarworks for listening ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, verse: until there is nothing left of us, pairing: dean/castiel, fandom: supernatural

Comments 74

ysbaddaden March 6 2010, 18:48:53 UTC

Your style has a wistful sort of sweetness that works very well with this story. You take your time setting the mood of each scene and it's very effective. I really enjoyed it! :)

devilyouwere March 7 2010, 06:36:03 UTC

Your style has a wistful sort of sweetness that works very well with this story.
Wow, thank you! That really means a lot :) I was having doubts with this fic because I'm more used to writing angst and drama, but all the feedback has been very positive. So, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it worked for you :D

dark_austral March 6 2010, 18:54:13 UTC

devilyouwere March 7 2010, 06:37:29 UTC

I'm really glad you pointed out the end with Cas and Dean walking down the road because it's probably my favourite part in the entire fic. And, also, thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm really happy this fic is working for people :)

moonlettuce March 6 2010, 19:45:52 UTC

This was just fabulous. The descriptions, the language, everything.

devilyouwere March 7 2010, 06:37:42 UTC

Aww, thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it.

pinkwater666 March 6 2010, 21:16:20 UTC

Ugh. I'm a little teary-eyed now because, really, this was beautiful.
Your writing is amazing and the language you use is what makes this story flow so well, so smoothly. This story is melancholic, but light and peaceful. And I can feel it, I can see it, I can smell it. That's just how good the imagery you created is.
I love your Castiel. I really love him.
And I think I've fallen in love with this verse and your writing and I just want to hug this fic forever.

<3

devilyouwere March 7 2010, 06:39:42 UTC

I'm a little teary-eyed now because, really, this was beautiful.
Oh, thank you so much! You just made me smile from ear to ear.

Oh man and then your comment only gets better! Wow, wow. Thank you for such a lovely comment. I'm so happy that you enjoy my style and the story worked for you. I was so unsure since it's not my usual genre, but yay!

I'm so glad you like Castiel! I was nervous about his characterization, so thank you!

Awww, you just made my heart soar. Thank you so so much! I hope to see you back for the next parts. ♥

mrs_gregsanders March 6 2010, 21:34:23 UTC

This is the happiest story I have ever read. I need you to keep writing it and keep being happy cause this made me melt all over and it was wonderful. Thank you for making them take Sam with them ♥ love me some Sammy. You, my dear, have outdone yourself this time. Also, CANADA. YEAAAA BITCHHHHH. WHO OWNS THE WINCHESTERS NOWWW.

devilyouwere March 7 2010, 06:42:02 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! Don't worry I will keep writing it. My muse is compelled to. It really doesn't want to write anything else :/ ♥ And you're welcome--Sam needed to come along. Poor thing, he's getting booted out soon (but he'll still be around!). But I really wanted to write fic where Sam was there and he was awesome.

You, my dear, have outdone yourself this time.
Oh, shush. :) But I'm happy I made you melt. I've never made someone melt. I usually make them cry.

FUCK YEAH CANADA. They're all up in our tundra, eating our poutine and wearing toques. Oh snap!