Is there something Im missing here?

May 10, 2004 21:29

So I figure since I didnt pay for this thing I might use it ( Read more... )

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Hi Davis. I'm at your house. _breadbox May 11 2004, 20:22:03 UTC
Just thought I'd let you know and stuff.

Your haiku isn't a haiku at all, it has 8 syllables (as opposed to the appropriate 7) in the middle line.

Just some advice. Love you, doll.

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baff. whisperedtheeye May 12 2004, 02:08:11 UTC
the japanese poetry fairy (bible man's second cousin) will smite you.

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