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Is there something Im missing here?
May 10, 2004 21:29
So I figure since I didnt pay for this thing I might use it (
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Hi Davis. I'm at your house.
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May 11 2004, 20:22:03 UTC
Just thought I'd let you know and stuff.
Your haiku isn't a haiku at all, it has 8 syllables (as opposed to the appropriate 7) in the middle line.
Just some advice. Love you, doll.
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baff.
whisperedtheeye
May 12 2004, 02:08:11 UTC
the japanese poetry fairy (bible man's second cousin) will smite you.
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Your haiku isn't a haiku at all, it has 8 syllables (as opposed to the appropriate 7) in the middle line.
Just some advice. Love you, doll.
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