purest of prose: mythpunk

[someoneingrey]

“You don’t know her.” Berne said as he stood next to Faolán. “She has been here a week.”

Faolán looked over the forest visible from his window. Liora had only been there a week, but she was the first woman to come through the castle in three hundred years who hadn’t been immediately frightened of him. She had stayed on and even spoken with him

Comments

[keppiehed]

Oh, this was an interesting tale. Like some others I have read, I wish it could have been longer. This had the feel of a real fairytale to it! I commend you for giving it an authentic gloss. Well done!

[someoneingrey]

Thank you! There might be more, the characters haven't decided yet. I want to play with it some more, because I know they have the potential to be some fun characters to work with.

[darkdepths]

I'd like to read more too. I think you could easily flesh this out into a full novel.