Purest of Prose: *City

[someoneingrey]

“This looks nothing like the city I knew,” Moira said, as she looked around. “What happened, Jack

Comments

[bluegerl]

Sad sort of story. Sad for the - oh dear, seemingly inevitable eventually happening to our cities somehow, (I dread those days to come),and so sad and hopeless for the two participants. They'll get it sorted. I wonder why they were apart for so long, and why did it take Jack so long to get in touch? There's more to this than meets the eye!

[someoneingrey]

There is definitely more to this, I think. I haven't decided if there is more story. Well... they haven't decided if there is more story. And Jack, well he's an ass.

[j_flattermann]

This shouts ‘write more’ to me.
Very interesting scenario. Makes one wonder if the two are making it.
Great take, very apocalyptic.

[someoneingrey]

Thanks. I think there might be more, but the characters aren't cooperating with me.

[leticiae]

This has a desolate feel, but definitely, it looks like something that could build into a greater situation. Are you planning on continuing with this story?

[someoneingrey]

Hopefully there will be more story, but I've got some horribly uncooperative characters at the moment.

Thank you!

[katden]

Very clean, very dark. Me likes!

[someoneingrey]

Thank you much!