Life for Rent - Chapter 2

[someonewillcare]

Finn POV

I woke up with a sharp shock as the sound my alarm ripped through me. As I slowly came to I looked at the time, 7:15. Why was it so much earlier than usual?

Oh that’s right I think Kurt set it earlier so I wasn’t late every day. He cares about me so much, its great.

But why do I always end up with the bed covers on the floor? I'm still in

Comments

[milky_haven]

*dances*

I loveloveloveLOVELOVE this so much that I can just hug this fic. Love the fluff so much. Yeah, they're just the complete opposite to each other. It's just so sweet and so cute and awww... Finn is being so sweet to Kurt. Exactly how my fanon world works.

[someonewillcare]

thanks =)

any specifics you could pick out so i know what my strengths are?
always trying to get better with each chapter i write

[milky_haven]

For me, I like how you make Finn being awkward in some ways and then being assertive in his actions. I realised this during the end of the chapter 'cause some writers will make Finn fumbling around while trying to mull over whether to kiss or not, but I think it depends on the plot, I would too hahah. That's gotta be my favourite scene in this chapter. It's just absolutely adorable.

You nailed their characterizations just fine (not perfectly, 'cause if you did, Finn wouldn't be gay ;p).

Next chapter, please. =)

[uniquegrl7]

Aaahh! I love this!! It's adorable. I can't wait for the next part!