Thank you. Im glad you can dig it.. and i like yours too.very pretty. and good imagery i like to think im getting better. but i still think your a better writer than me.:) no matter what you say.. but thank you.. it means alot coming from you. i wrote another one before i wrote this one. but i dont feel like posting it.. i think its kinda cheezy.:) ill email it to you so you can tell me what you think. your opinion means alot because you are very very talented in this area.
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the same as i
the same frustrations...
the same troubled minds
i know of things that make me hurt
i walk past those things
i know of words that cut and burn
i try to forget, at least
i know of moods that make me smile
i latch on to the ones that last a while
i know of beauty when i see your smile
so i kiss your eyelids while you're in denile
you say i bite, and draw blood
but you're confused
i lick the dew drops you infuse
i sit and wait and pass the time
i watch the sand, buried alive
i've watched the setting sun
a million times an hour
just for fun.
i'll sit through a thousand more
enjoy the view
create something lovely
hum something new
lay down for You
i've awoken for You
bring her to me
bring me her truth.
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i like to think im getting better. but i still think your a better writer than me.:) no matter what you say.. but thank you.. it means alot coming from you. i wrote another one before i wrote this one. but i dont feel like posting it.. i think its kinda cheezy.:) ill email it to you so you can tell me what you think. your opinion means alot because you are very very talented in this area.
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