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Star Trek Fic: Outlogicked

Sep 17, 2009 22:31

Title: Outlogicked
Fandom: Star trek XI
Author: Sommik
Pairings: Kirk/Spock
Rating: PG-13
Summary: An encounter with an ancient device almost brings down the Enterprise. Not to mention Spock.
Warnings: Attempt at humour and a bit of fluff.
Word count: 4,142
Disclaimer: Star Trek and all related material are copyrighted trademarks of Paramount Pictures, ( Read more... )

fic: star trek, kirk/spock

Comments 48

starcrossedtrek September 17 2009, 21:25:12 UTC

XD EPIC WIN.

Love this, it cracked me up. Excuse me while I recover myself.

*time passes*

I didn't notice much in the way of errors, but if you like I'll have a look through more thoroughly (where I'm not focusing on the awesomeness).

sommik September 17 2009, 21:29:13 UTC

So glad you found it funny. Wasn't sure if the humour was actually good enough, and it just ended up falling flat.
I'd love a look through. I'm not a native English speaker, so something is bound to have gone wrong :-D

starcrossedtrek September 17 2009, 22:18:27 UTC

Alrighty I'll have a crack at it :) How much feedback would you like - just spelling/grammar fix ups, or suggestions for alternate phrasings as well?

sommik September 17 2009, 22:21:35 UTC

Any and all would be very welcome. I'm always ready to learn more. And if it can make the fic stronger, I'm all for it.

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solfastir September 17 2009, 21:56:02 UTC

Lmao, windows xp. Loved it. :p ♥

sommik September 17 2009, 22:12:55 UTC

Very glad you liked it :-D

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Re: !!! sommik September 17 2009, 22:15:36 UTC

I got a desktop PC running XP as well as my work laptop, and then I have a netbook running Linux (Ubuntu). Never tried Mac myself myself, but the others have caused me quite some grief over the years, but also fun times. Especially near a deadline, when the darn things...just...won't...work. Fun times.

danahid September 17 2009, 22:10:04 UTC

LOL! Those error messages alone are why I'm a Mac person. :-)

sommik September 17 2009, 22:18:04 UTC

Hehe. Windows is fun. I'm just glad I never had to bother with Vista. I have absolutely no problems compared to my colleagues who'd had to upgrade. Hehe.

wonderpup September 17 2009, 22:13:01 UTC

I was like OH NOES up until,

"Keptin, Keptin, I think I know what et iz,” Chekov suddenly shouted exitedly from his station. ”Et iz not a wirus, but something called Microsoft Windows XP."
lol

though, slightly disappointed with the lack of BSoD

sommik September 17 2009, 22:19:31 UTC

"though, slightly disappointed with the lack of BSoD"

I know, I know. I tried, but I think that would have been too much for poor Spock.