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[sonata_night]

Title: As The Sun Rises

Comments

[kelly_girl]

I liked the everyday normalcy of them hanging out and how their relationship progressed compared to how Daniel went from folding his clothes to just leaving them on the floor. Great bedroom scenes too. I like the thought of Jack laying there with Daniel watching over him when he was drunk.

[jira_rd]

Thank you. This was definitely not a good fic, however, in my eyes. I'm going to rewrite some of it tomorrow and repost it, because near the end I started rushing it, if only because I was tired.

But yes, I agree. I love doing fics where you just see how they are on a daily basis, not in a once or twice situation. :D

*pets Danny and Jack* These boys are really sweet. And *grin* I can so totally see Jack watching Daniel and getting pissy because he doesn't WANT to be up but he's worried about Daniel and when Daniel kind of blinks at him, all is forgiven because Daniel doesn't mean to make Jack worry and Jack knows he feels bad.

[burbler]

Very good...excellent progression. Wrapped up nicely too!

[jira_rd]

Thank you! And your icon = Both disturbing and hilarious.

[burbler]

I'd like to take credit, but it is one of Clarity_lore's :)

[dracothelizard]

"Because Draco is still my muse and I dedicate all my Stargate fic to her."

*prances around in toga*

It's fluffy! And cute! And it has lightning. I like it :D.

[sonata_night]

^^; Toga, toga, toga! *a la Animal House* And if you have not seen that film, you should. Absolutely hilarious representation of college life.

:D I'm glad you like it! Fluffy and cute is good! And lightning is VERY good. I will be reworking it tonight though to fix a few errors so :P

[dracothelizard]

Lightning is the best natural weather phenomenum ever. Especially if it induces snogging ^^

What's next? The horrible cliché outline I wrote whilst drunk?

[jira_rd]

Yep!

[aizjanika]

This is a lovely story. :-)

[jira_rd]

Thank you. :D

[kayleelupin]

Lovely, even though I've never read Jack/Daniel R-rated slash before (unless your rabbit story is R...I don't remember any R-rated scenes yet.) Interesting take. I'm still a Sam/Jack shipper first though, sorry. Although I will write Sam/Janet. For you. ^.~

~Kaylee

[jira_rd]

*grin* The rabbit story is going to end up MUCHO NC-17. Not quite yet R unless you count the dream sequences. XDDD

Sam/Janet SG-1 LESBIAN OTP 4EVA!