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Apr 29, 2006 21:42

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quidditch_fan April 30 2006, 02:54:14 UTC

Yay!

I like Pissy!Dom.... :)

For me I guess any story thrives on the characterization. I think you gave us just a glimpse, but what a lovely glimpse it was.

ps... if you ever need a beta, let me know.

jira_rd April 30 2006, 03:22:18 UTC

Thanks! :D I am quite glad to know you like Pissy!Dom, and I rarely write him. My emotions definitely affected very slightly this story.

Thanks for the offer, I actually have a couple betas, but I will keep you in mind in case they can't help me out. :D

loozy April 30 2006, 10:23:57 UTC

Niiiice... I loved the build- up, with the inevitable tension etc...

Hehehe...

stormatdusk May 1 2006, 20:01:53 UTC

nice!

jira_rd May 1 2006, 22:09:25 UTC

Thanks! :D Can I snitch your icon?

stormatdusk May 2 2006, 04:33:00 UTC

KC's Lair, where I got it, was offering it freely, so be my guest.

msilverstar June 11 2006, 04:39:41 UTC

Bookmarked this, and I'm glad I came back. Despite some rough edges, the sexual tension is really effective. Nicely done.

jira_rd June 11 2006, 04:48:29 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, I just reread it, and there were some bits that were rough. The reason for that being that I was writing it absolutely exhausted as finals rolled around, late at night. Tomorrow, when I'm more awake, I'll go back and fix the errors.

But I'm very glad you liked it! :D I've seen you around and I'm actually going through the Monaboyd archives myself just for the heck of it. XD I'm somewhere in early 2004.

msilverstar June 11 2006, 04:58:00 UTC

Yay! I'm putting my notes on my del.icio.us list for later reccing. I encourage you to do recs, it would be interesting to see what stands up over time.

jira_rd June 11 2006, 05:00:00 UTC

Yeah, I saved the recs I have so far, and once I get up tomorrow I'm starting on where I end tonight ((obviously. It wouldn't make sense to just randomly read. :P)).

Though, for all the good, there is a lot of crap. ><; Or maybe it's just my refusal to read things that haven't been spaced and are nothing but one block paragraph. And the occasional spelling and grammar mishap is fine, but no more than three or four in a story unless it's way long.

... *grammar rant done*

Sorry. :D

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