Demon Desire: Prologue + Chapter 1

[soneayeong]

A/N: I already have started with updating this fic on Asianfanfic's

Comments

[awshin]

Yunho sounds more like a sacrifice to me >

[soneayeong]

Hmm, you are *almost* thinking in the right direction, but almost... xD
Jae need to take care of his innocent human ^_^ So don't worry!

I'm updating the next chapter tomorrow, so i hope that you will like it ^_^

[ext_1727302]

amazing !!! I love jaeho a lot
I'm liking this story so far but I'm confused coz I can't figure out if jaejoong is a good or a bad guy here I mean I'm sure he cares about Yunho and he's trying his best to act calm and nice with him but he has a scary aura and he tortures humans ? That's why he doesn't want Yunho to see what's going on outside but isn't Yunho a human too ? I also have a feeling that he killed yunho's mom but let's not speculate too much on that for now
I like the fact that things are still unclear in this FF it makes it more exciting , I'll be looking forward for your next updates , good luck ^^

[soneayeong]

Jae has indeed a really dark auro, you are right about that... ^_^

I'm going to update the next chapter in a few minutes, so i hope that you will like it!

and thanks for the comment!