Turning Back (2/?)

[songforevela]

Title: Turning Back (2/?)
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Comments

[mana1023]

Ooh, so good. More please. :)

[songforevela]

Thank you! There will definitely be more!

[songforevela]

Thank you so much! More is definitely coming...

[kentish_queen]

Another cliffhanger? Your going to kill me the suspense!

Update soon. Please?!

[songforevela]

I know! The suspense! But more is coming, promise. Thanks so much for reading.

[calm_lips]

I really love this fic. I really like that Bella's change didn't work and Edward is now pulling away from her. I can't wait to find out what happened and why it's taken so long for the others to get in touch with Bella and Esme.

Are you planning on making the chapters longer? Because as it stands they're a little bit short.

[songforevela]

I'm glad you really like it! Yeah, I'm working on trying to make the chapters a little longer. This is my first fanfic (actually it's my first any fiction that I've written--ever), so I have just been trying things out, seeing if I can actually write anything!

[calm_lips]

You can definitely write! This fic is fantastic - it's original, well-written, and very interesting. Don't worry about your writing being at all bad, because it's not! :) Post more soon!

[nebakanezer]

I love that Esme is the one who took her away and is protecting her. This is very well written. :)

[songforevela]

I love that Esme is the one that gets Bella out as well, and it was fun to write some Bella/Esme interaction. Thanks!